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Hunger PanicI can feel the bones inside, The beautiful skeleton that is my mind. Look in the mirror: See the fat. See the girl made by mistake.Hunger Panic
Fear is crawling up my throat, Take my hands - Don't let me choke. Bending over, just can't breathe, Watch my ribs shake as I heave.
The hunger eats right through my heart; Burning, fighting, Tempting darts. I won't be a burden, can't make me sin, Ignore the fire from within.
Freedom yearning through open lips; A silent scream, That slowly rips, Through the fragile wall between, t


.freeBind my soul in bleeding chains, Lock my heart with another's pains, My mind and self the only key: To be given, handed free..free
Trapped and caged with no escape. Is it real, is it fate? Forgotten because I would not obey -
I broke the rules, I was not your prey.
Scream the truth and fight the lies, No longer living through other's eyes. Little heretic skipping off to school -
No longer afraid to be uncool.
So flood the tears and bleed the rain. I'm crying blood, wet fears again. One more cut? Just one more time? Leave me be, I'll be
Viktoria III

VengeanceFeel my pain And know my wounds, Hear my screams That filter the moon. To cause you pain Would bring me joy. To rip out your heart, Youre only my toy. Feel my wrath, Your ears will roar, From your centre I shall remove your core. You shall scream And you shall moan. May you know the pain of being alone. Do unto others as will be done to you. I alone Shall make these words true. You have caused pain You have caused fear Never again Shall you call me dear.Vengeance
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I bet you $50 the world won't end in 2012, cause if it does end, I won't owe you $50.
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Blame the cruel Art of Pretension .
How are you!?
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I have been astonished that men could die martyrs for their religion.
I have shudder'd at it.
I shudder no more.
I could be martyr'd for my religion -
Love is my religion.
And I could die for that.
I could die for you.
♡
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"Thinking of a way to survive may be natural to a person, but those who think only of themselves will destroy themselves." - Sir Kambei
Much appreciated, and keep up with your poetry, it's interesting!
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Hides in the corners of her mind, where she plays contently.
She leaves this nightmare far behind, she escapes inside her dreams.
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*muahahahaha*
(no, I'm not crazy ;D....)
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I have been astonished that men could die martyrs for their religion.
I have shudder'd at it.
I shudder no more.
I could be martyr'd for my religion -
Love is my religion.
And I could die for that.
I could die for you.
♡
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Blame the cruel Art of Pretension .
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